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Hey guys I hope your going to this next chapter because work very hard on it. = )

Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto or his friends.

Warnings: theirs NaruSasu,Yaoi and Mpreg (a little later ok )

Now lets started XD

                                                                  NaruSasu Vamprie Love Story
                                                                               Chapter 2

Naruto's POV (still XD)

I looked at Sasuke "Why are you Blushing Sasuke?" I asked him.Sasuke's eyes went wide "N-nothing..Ok..." he said as he stutter and he turn his head away from me.
"Oh ok" I said then I went to the other side of him and I looked at him and see he was still blushing then I said "Then why are you still blushing Sasuke?..mmm?" I looked at him.

Sasuke's POV
My face turn very very red as a tomato.'Crap...why am I blushing so much?'I thought. "Well Sasuke?" said the blue eye boy.I look at him and I said" I'm fine..." Then my throat started to burn."Ah!!" I scream as I grub my throat."Sasuke!! are you ok!!??" Said the worriedly blond as he looked at me."Ah...ah no I'm not..ah" I said while I was still holding my throat.

"Sasuke!!" Said Naruto with worried-ness in his voice." Naruto....I need...ah...blood.." I said while I looked at Naruto blue eyes."Oh......why?" asked Naru.

I look at Naruto " Baka!!! I'm a Vam- ah! vampire..."I said to him while I was holding my throat as it was still burning." Oh  you can have some of my blood if you want. "he said  to me very kindly."T-thanks..." I said.


Nomal POV.
Naruto put his arm out to Sasuke so he could feed off him. Then Sasuke stick's his fangs into naruto's arm to drink his blood..

Naruto's POV

"Ah…." I moan as Sasuke was sucking my blood. He still sucking my blood and he look up at me and he release his fangs from my arm and said " Thanks.." he said as he blush at me. "Why are blushing Sasuke?" I asked while I looking at him. "umm….I I.." he said while he looked away from me. 'Why is Sasuke blushing at me?' I thought as I put my hand on the back of my head then I said "Sasuke please tell me.." The dark hair boy was looking at me and replied " Ok but please don't laugh at me.."

" Ok I won't I promise…" I said while looking at him. "Ok I..I think I'm falling in love with you…" Sasuke said as he turn he head away from me and then said" I understand if you don't feel the same way.." then he stand up and walk over to a different tree and lean against it. 'H….he loves me….but why?' he thought while his eyes went wide. " Why do you love me?" I asked him.

He looked at me and said "I don't know, but somehow I fell in love with you…" He said with his eyes close and was still blushing. "oh…" I said while blushing a little and then I thought 'Maybe I love him to..'

Sasuke's POV

'Why do I love him?'I thought with my eyes still close. And then I remember what my big bro said to me.'Oh remember what Itachi said to me' he thought and was about to fall asleep stand up.

=Flash Back=

"Itachi can I ask you something?" I asked him.
"What is it?" He asked me.
" How do you know when you found your mate?" I asked him.
" Well you will know because 1 you will be blushing a lot around this parson, 2 You will not keep your eyes off this person and 3 your stomach will hurt like hell, so you well be going into heat..so yea then you well know" He said to me.
I looked at and said" That last part sounds painful"
"Well that's how vampire find their mates" My bro said to me.

=End Of Flash Back=

I open my eyes and thought' ok 1 I'm blushing a lot around Naruto....' I looked over to Naruto to see what's he was doing. Then the bonde looked to Sasu 'Why is he looking at me?' thought Naru.

'Why do I keep looking at him..?' I thought and then I thought again ' Oh great I can stop looking at him thats number 2..' My eyes go wide. Then I feel pain in my stomach. "Gah!" I scream and put both of my hands to my stomach.
'ah...Oh my god this hurts like hell!..so that's means Naruto is my mate' I thought and then I scream again.

Naruto's POV
I herd Sasuke screaming and then I looked over to him.
"Sasuke!! are you all right!!" I yelled with worried in my voice. "N..no AHHH!" Sasuke said as he screamed with both on his hands still on his stomach and bend down a little."Than what wrong?" I said and ran to the tree where he was at. "My stomach hurts…" he said before he screamed again. I want over to him and hugged him while was still screaming."N..naruto..ah! why are you hugging me? Ahhhh!" Sasuke said as was trying not to screamed to loud. "Because I don't like seeing you in pain" I said to him while I was stilling hugging him. 'Why did I say that? And why is my heart betting so fast, Do I really love him…' I thought.


Sasuke's POV
I looked at him and I said" Why?..ah!" then was  I was screaming in pain again. "Because…I Lov…Love you that's why.." he said as he stuttering a little and blushing at me.

"You do?" I asked and I screamed again because of the pain I was in right now. "Yea I do Sasu" he said. "Then kiss me,Naruto" I said looking at him. "Ok" he said. Then he lean toward me and kissed me and I moan it fell so good and then I broke  the kiss and I screamed very loud.

"Sasuke what's wrong?!" Said the worried blond. "Naruto I'm in heat…" I said as I holding my stomach with both of my hand like I was hugging it. I wanted the pain to go away and now I was sweating like crazy. "What!!" He said with his eyes went wide.

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End Of Chapter 2

Me: I hope you like it!! = )
Naru: hahaha Sasuke is in pain XD
Sasu: Ah! Not funny Dobe!!!>.>
Me: Plz Review and I hope you like it^^
Well thats it plz tell me what U think and No hate comments ok.
I do not own Naruto and his friends.
Warnings: NaruSasu, Yaoi and Mpreg (in later chapters ^^)

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Next Chapter : NaruSasu Vampire Love Story Chapter 3
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AnonimadeLima Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2014  Student Filmographer
oh my... I love it!!!!
why I always find good stories but incomplete.... :'( :'(
Wishing you return to finish it one day....
:D :D
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narusasulover16 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I will I am doing a big editing out thing with my fanfictions. 
On my Fanfiction.net account chapter 3 is up on there. 

Here my account I have a lot of stories on there: www.fanfiction.net/~narusasulo…;
Here it is the vampire love story chapter 3: www.fanfiction.net/s/7174258/3…
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AnonimadeLima Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014  Student Filmographer
Thank you very much I will read from there
:D :D
just to let you know I said that because I saw the publish day and is very old...
If you know what I mean... :D :D
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narusasulover16 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Yea I know hehe I forgot to put it up in here. 
I was going to like a few months ago but I want to update all chapters of my fanfics.
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AnonimadeLima Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014  Student Filmographer
Well in that case I will check more frequently for a new fanfics...
just hoping you will also paste here because your fanfic is a good one but still incomplete, right?? :S :S
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narusasulover16 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Still incomplete but I am not giving up on it. 
I just need more ideas. I am trying to figure out the plot for it hehe. 
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AnonimadeLima Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014  Student Filmographer
That's great... :D :D
never give up, I know you will figure it out :D :D
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narusasulover16 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Yup :) 
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shyvampiress1997 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I need the next chapter!!!
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narusasulover16 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Here Chapter 3 it's on fanfiction: www.fanfiction.net/s/7174258/3…
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RemedyKuria Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
I'm sorry for being stupid but what does 'in heat' mean?
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narusasulover16 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Cats go into heat, it's means they want to do it with another cat and have kittens of their own.
It's ok, I didn't mind answering it.
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RemedyKuria Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
Thank you, I knew it would be something like that but I wasn't sure. Loved the fanfic!!
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narusasulover16 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
your welcome and thanks
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DEATHACHEMIST Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
CAN'T WAIT
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Hakanania Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this next chapter needs to be up before i flip out
not rushing but i LOVE IT
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narusasulover16 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks and that one I am still working on it ok :)
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Hakanania Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
btw love your character you know the one on your icon i forgot his name though
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narusasulover16 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks. His name is Sasudie he is in one of my other stories on here.
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Hakanania Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
so i had it right there are just so many sasu___'s out there now days i get mixed up but you can tell his parentage easy if you've seen the show
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Twinkle-yum Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012
o.o <(*'^'*)> awesome
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narusasulover16 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks :)
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MercyBringingAngel Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it, vampires are cool... And so is sasunaru!
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narusasulover16 Featured By Owner May 2, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Yea they are and thanks = )
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moonbaby78 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011
its awesome
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narusasulover16 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
thanks = )
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moonbaby78 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2011
no prob ^.^
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wolfcubb Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
I laughed at the last part but its very nice! I love it!!!
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narusasulover16 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
thank - you so much = )
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wolfcubb Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
:D
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Shauni2420 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2011
So... KAWAII!
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narusasulover16 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks = )

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tenderheartedthorn Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011
....must...have....more....
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narusasulover16 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
I'm still working on the next chapeter ok = )
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yay :D
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*giggles*
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more........
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I'm still working on the next chapeter ok ^^
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nice dude.
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Thanks = )

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np
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That was great!! :)
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:nod:
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nice girl :love: it
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